my 3 mentors

My first mentor is titled “what if he hadn’t?” by Ben
Futterman.http://benselablog.blogspot.com/2011/01/what-if-he-hadnt.html His post had questions that bought me more into it. And his first paragraph caught people by including them. Something that I should get better at, because in my posts I just talk about myself. And still he also wrote about himself. Us and him, great post. And I love how he put a certain question in my head, “what if he hadn’t?” made his own theory and I made my own too.

My second
mentor is titled “as if they have control”by Audrey Bachman http://lostinreading.blogspot.com/2010/10/ten-thousand-rupees-1-girl.html. This post if packed with so much personality and meaning, and hate. And I just love how the readers know how Audrey
is feeling. All that shame and hate is completely shown in this book. She does this with repetition. Some people don’t have the power of writing a good post that includes repition that just sounds like it on and on and never stops. But her repetition shows her rage and makes up the whole post.

My last
mentor is “fly away home” by Kai Junn Lathrop. http://mrpancakemix.blogspot.com/2010/10/fly-away-home-mr-pancake-mixs-response.html?showComment=1297207976754#c5740946060745025103His poem is so true. Seems true.
And this true makes the reader love his post. And I love how Kai uses his ideas
and opinions on people who are living in poverty. It seems so true with the
story “fly away home” backing up his opinions. A post so true and voice. It’s a
deep post.